Added: Nov 18, 2008

From: fungirl4343

Duration: 1:36

ok i know i said 5 comments and i only got two but I'm really bored and yeah so heres part two hope you like it.W/MANDYShe ran as fast as she could trying to get to where Marissa was shopping but somebody pulled her into a dark corner of the mall.A:(about to scream)??:shhh its ok its just me Nick(takes off his hat and sunglasses)A:(had a really mad look on her face)what the hell is your problem you almost gave me a heart attack(punched him in the stomach)N:(held his stomach)owww...for..a..girlyou hurt very hardA:sorry what are you doing hereN:we got bored so we came here to see you guysA:we?N:yeah Joe,Kevin,and IA:can we get out of there cause im tiredN:yeah lets go find the othersthey went to find Joe and Taylor who were looking at dresses but Joe was completely bored and then they found Marissa and Kevin who trying to look for them.okay that wasn't the best chapter but thats all i could think of and please subscribe to me and comment because on my last chapter there was 27 views and only 2 comments and I know my stories aren't that bad but I have my days were they are good.So please comment and rate it it would mean alot and thank you to populargirl101 and smashley101010 for commenting on my last chapter thank you so much.

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Rating: 5.00 (1 ratings)    Views: 57' favoriteCount='1    Comments: 8

MrsJenniferJonas94 Says:

Nov 18, 2008 - okay so I am the first comment?? right?? welllllll LOVEE it!

populargirl101 Says:

Nov 18, 2008 - I LOVE THIS SERIES!!! I'M SOOO EXCITED FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER! WOO HOO! You are an amazing writer!

myctslpztnght Says:

Nov 18, 2008 - three

myctslpztnght Says:

Nov 18, 2008 - two

myctslpztnght Says:

Nov 18, 2008 - one,five comments!!!

myctslpztnght Says:

Nov 18, 2008 - BTWtags in a vid are for when someone looks for a vid and it matches what you wrote(like : jonas chapter) the vid appears,maby thats why not a lot of people find your vid.ohh and on your next vid write a diffr'nt title that doesnt say love chapter because 1. it can be distinguished(however that is written)2. not a lot of people like reading stories of a fan and the jonas other then a true story(no offense intended)3. in a vid you can rite your story so its better to do it that waybye

SAGURLS Says:

Nov 18, 2008 - next one plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

fungirl4343 Says:

Nov 18, 2008 - i've read lots of stories in the video and i don't really like it that way and the comments that plp leave are saying to put it in the description bow so i don't put it in there and thanks for the idea thought and ill def make some changes.:)